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Submitted: March 25, 2006
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Line art for a friend of mine. Back in November he sent me a few games and didn't even ask for any money. Well I couldn't have that so I offered to do something for him and created him a character. Unfortunately, it didn't turn out anywhere near a nice as I was hoping, but I tried. I couldn't even get the DOOM logo to look right. I even drew perspective lines to try to get it looking nice, but no dice. I'll probably try improving it, hopefully it shapes up when I color it. Critiques, ideas, etc are welcome as always, though this time I'm encouraging 'em.
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`triptychr:icontriptychr: Mar 25, 2006, 9:10:40 PM
I don't see what's so bad about it at all. I think the design is cool; has a mild urban flavor to it.

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~blue-elem3nt:iconblue-elem3nt: Mar 25, 2006, 10:40:34 PM
Well thanks, I just couldn't get my hand to work the pencil right or something, just didn't turn out the way I was trying to.
~jrcv:iconjrcv: Mar 26, 2006, 10:36:16 AM
I'd be more interested if I saw it colored. :)
~CrossKetsueki:iconCrossKetsueki: Mar 26, 2006, 6:10:00 PM
oh so that is the pic u want to color D: why didnt i see it >_<...argh damnit
looks good so far :3
~licketysplit:iconlicketysplit: Mar 26, 2006, 7:41:55 PM
It's gonna look awesome once you've coloured it. They always do, because you're colouring rocks. yes yes. the DOOM logo looks fine, shush you.
The only thing that even remotely bothers me is that his upper body is kinda short, looks alittle scrunched up. Otherwise. Excellent pic, and I can't wait to see it coloured.

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~SecretAgentRynn:iconSecretAgentRynn: Mar 26, 2006, 7:44:49 PM
HOLY CRAP! HALO ART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!exclamationpoint!

The DOOM logo doesn't look that bad. And if you end up coloring it and stuff, you could always do the cheap method and photoshop an actual logo on there. =P

His hands/forearms look rather large, but then again, he does appear to be a bigger guy, so I'm not sure if that's intentional or not. o.o

That is my critique.
~blue-elem3nt:iconblue-elem3nt: Mar 26, 2006, 9:04:17 PM
Okay, glad I'm not the only one who saw that. I took one look at it once it was uploaded and said "dang, those are some big hands!" XD Eh, just something to touch up, lol. Thanks! ^_^
~blue-elem3nt:iconblue-elem3nt: Mar 26, 2006, 9:05:34 PM
Oh, wow.... you're right. Didn't even notice it, thanks! I'll have to fix that one. Glad you think the DOOM logo looks alright, it was frustrating me. XD
~blue-elem3nt:iconblue-elem3nt: Mar 26, 2006, 9:06:27 PM
Thanks! ^_^ I'll start coloring it hopefully sometime this week.